Monday, October 19, 2009

A task more than a journal...




Hello Guys!


This week, I would really ask you for something related to our writing project: This I believe. I would like that you share your This I believe essay introduction with us. Remember that it is important to have a strong and focused thesis statement. You can find helpful tips here:












Have a great week!


Teacher Eva

11 comments:

  1. Hello Again!
    I don't like to start the week saying this, but it has to be said. Last week, someone copied and pasted her classmates ideas. This is not what the blog is about; this blog is about sharing YOUR OWN IDEAS and OPINIONS with your classmates, not using somebody else's ideas as if they were yours. If a person does that, she is not using this blog with the objective that was intended, and will not be allowed to make more contributions in the future and lose the 10% out of the total grade. Honesty should be one of our main qualities as writers, and as people too.

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  2. I believe in the love from animals

    I´ve always belived that the animals have the ability of feel love to their owners. I believe that hey feel sad or happy depending of the attitude of their owners.

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  3. hello everybody!!!!
    I believe in love, because it is a beautiful feeling.
    Also, the love is confidence, the love is respect, the love is help other people. I love my God, I love my family, I love the life, and I think that they love me too.

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  4. Hello people!, It´s believed that today the values have been lost, but I believe that they stil exist in some people, because I see people doing acts of kindness.

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  5. Well, I believe in the importance of taking care our health, because the most people eating and drinkining anything, and take sometimes medicines without consulting a doctor. For that reason, is very important to eat healthy foods, low fat, avoid the alcohol and drugs...
    Teacher Eva I decided to change my topic because the another was longer and complicated...thanks

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  6. I belive in my mother's love because she always is worry for me, is the only person that be with me in good and bad times; at each moment she is giving advice to me because she want that I have a better life and a good future. She almost ever support my decisions. For this and other reasons I love my mother.

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  7. Howdy friends, I wanna be honest, I was in the hospital because, I Had a Big problem with my Stomach. But it doesn't matter now.

    What I Believe?
    As I told you before, first of all I believe God, also in my Religion, My Family (Dad, Mom, n' My Sister) but as you said, I'm believing in what I know, however everyone has something good to show us, to teach us. What I know? I know that I'm prepared to teach, to become better everyday, to say "The World is chanllenge that I must take and put it into my pocket.

    Teacher We must talk ASAP!< cya on Friday

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  8. I believe in the importance of having good friends! Real ones actually.

    Professor Eva, I've been trying to post my comment, with no results though. I always type on Word to later paste it here but today the blog isn't giving me the option to paste... I e.mailed you my introduction. However, Imma keep trying.


    *Jiniva Serrano*

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  9. =] Yay! I made it!!! hehehe



    The Importance of Having Good Friends

    There is a famous saying that goes something like this: “Nobody gets to pick the family”. Although, I think it is wrong, good friends are your family. The family you had the chance to choose by yourself. Having good friends did not use to be part of my childhood. Nowadays I can say I just keep one friend from those Elementary School days, one from High School, and a couple from my tough College days. However, why is that? Since I was a little girl, I have been very independent. My parents, specially my mother, would tell me that big girls work on their own and do not expect people to help them because we have to show we are strong too. Being a grown up surrounded by immature children and my constant desire for success, made me be almost always surrounded by people who would be by my side as long as I help them, academically speaking. Nevertheless, one day you really grow up. That day I realized I was alone and missing things because rather that making friends, I would be home being the bookworm I used to.


    *Jiniva Serrano*

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  10. Hello friends, this is I believe.
    “THE FAMILY LOVE”
    The family is where it becomes possible to love, unconditional love parents, who started the family with a promise of love, love their children because they are their children, not because of their qualities. "The family is the center of intimacy and openness."
    It is within the human family where we grow, which is taught to think, to deepen, to reflect. It is in the field of family where we learn the cultivation of virtue, the respect that is the guardian of love, honesty, generosity, responsibility, love of work, gratitude, and so on. The family invites us to be creative in the cultivation of intelligence, the will and heart, and open ourselves to contribute to society, prepared and integrate.

    ..."Veronica Gonzalez"

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  11. I believe in God because he teaches us to be good people because if we live a life very quickly we can finish.

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